I wish to feel the morning breeze
and taste the morning dew
I wish to smell the lilies
and watch the sunset hue
I want to tread on unknown lands
and form friendships all along
To wake up on a boat
To be the subject of a song
To see the lights of a far off village
that glisten on an evening still
to pour my love in the glass of the universe
until it fills and spills
I wouldn't say you're all I want
for that would be untrue
I am just a gypsy, and life my dance
that I want to share with you
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19 comments:
Beautiful! A love poem that's about the love for life. The last two lines are particularly inspiring!
good to see the believer this time :) the melody of life is sweet but it's sweetest when you sing it along...
The dance is always spiced up a bit with a partner...
Here's mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/04/25/relativity-of-time-and-place/
Beautiful metaphors and images in this poem...I love the line "to pour my love in the glass of the universe." Stunning!
@Darshan
thanks! what greater love than love for life! :)
@Anonymous
Believer, yes, that I am! :) Thanks for the visit! :)
@Kim
Adore your place! Thanks for the visit! Hope to see you here again! :)
@The Write Girl
Thanks, loved your piece too! :)
What a lovely poem!
By the way, thank you very much for your sweet comment on my post today. I would have replied privately, but your email is not connected to your Blogger account.
"to pour my love in the glass of the universe
until it fills and spills"
stunning imagery!
Lovely... I feel like reading it over and over again :)
@Me
Thank you :)
Thank you haikulovesongs :)
Seema, thanks for reading and appreciating :)
who doesn't want to be the subject of a song? love your words.
:) Thank you Marian
Tulika, this is such a beautiful and wistful poem! I wish you all of these things!
Mary! Thank you so much! :)
Cute and bubbling! Love the lines:
"to pour my love in the glass of the universe
until it fills and spills..."
Nothing like the truth up front. Nice write.
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