Saturday, September 03, 2011

Dawn

You fell on me
gently, like a wistful drop of dew
on my million lonely dawns
when sleepy eyed
I had watched the sun rise
and closed my eyes again
to dream of the dusk in your porch
You fell on me
warmly, like the whimsical figment
of morning light that makes its way
through the crevices of our joined bodies
and weighs down my eyes
as I watch you
breathing, sleeping, dreaming

12 comments:

SUB said...

lovely poem :)

ayala said...

Lovely and dreamy............

Mary said...

Oh, this is so beautiful! A gentle and loving poem.

sawan said...

felt like you had a story to tell! beautiful.

Geraldine said...

this makes me feel all warm and sentimental. lovely work Tulika, you've captured the emotions so beautifully.

suvaiba fatima ahmed said...

wow
lovely one...!
tc
suvaiba

Celestial Dreamz said...

warm and lovely poem ... :-)

Tarang Sinha said...

Beautiful poem & lovely imagery:)

Jyoti Mishra said...

beautifully written...
lovely expressions

Nice read !!

Anne said...

I like how it maintains it's tone throughout. A dream like quality, and words are subtle as well. Nothing jarring. Lovely!

Amiya chatterjee said...

Makes me ecstatic solemnly !Love to passthrough the rhythmic crevices almost poetic or should I say lyrical.

Jack said...

Tulika,

Emotions of being with someone whom you love said so well.

Take care