You came last night
dressed in your best suit
My heart fluttered
as you smiled
that familiar, disarming smile
That gold wrapped box
you held
glistened
in the light of the moon
that looked almost
like a halo behind you
But it was blurred
by the mist in my eyes
as you placed
under my feet
those beautiful ballerina shoes
And I lost myself to the music
and to you
for what seems like an eternity
It still smells of you
all around me
almost as if
you were really here last night
Just you
and me
No accident
No wheelchair
9 comments:
Whoa...the words took me down very gently. Nice!
This is strong. Good good good. I felt it. I don't know a better compliment for poetry than that.
that was A #endearing poem. Just you and me.no accident or wheel chair.
whew, quite the turn in those closing lines...having lost something so real and passionate...strong write...
Strong and moving.
You manage to create always a strong indulgence in your writing. A beautiful beginning like a dream, like a fairy tale, intriguing, intimate and then suddenly, the hard grave truth. Still, a hope lasts, everytime.
A wonderful write.
Thats an all 'round well thought out blog
This makes great sense to anyone!
You could not be more precise!!!
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