tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2310182421024668428.post8133731660595651382..comments2024-01-18T14:26:29.533+05:30Comments on Indulgence: 11.11.2010Tulika Vermahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15401674385189410785noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2310182421024668428.post-4647781282051274232011-03-12T17:04:08.375+05:302011-03-12T17:04:08.375+05:30Excellent start, the first line hits you.
first t...Excellent start, the first line hits you. <br />first two paragraphs were very balanced and unbaised and refreshing. The part in the third paragraph where every sentence starts with "I" got a little monotonous.<br />you should try and take it to the next level.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14912005100604644659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2310182421024668428.post-21745879093720408372011-01-13T19:02:31.660+05:302011-01-13T19:02:31.660+05:30First, I think you do need to write more of these....First, I think you do need to write more of these. Second, you said "I dream, I question, I analyze and I love and live." Just out of sheer inquisitiveness I have one simple querry, i.e., "When you dream, you can't analyze; when you question, you can't love; and when you do all these stuff how can you live?"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2310182421024668428.post-63077621543766157902010-11-17T14:49:52.981+05:302010-11-17T14:49:52.981+05:30:) I can so identify with you. And then you end up...:) I can so identify with you. And then you end up thinking how can you be so naive. But that is the wonder of it all. In spite of these moments you still believe in the basic goodness.Flying Machinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17815810575227948972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2310182421024668428.post-3226827638291284832010-11-13T13:15:32.726+05:302010-11-13T13:15:32.726+05:30It's OK to rant once in a while and what bette...It's OK to rant once in a while and what better place than one's own blog :)Seema Smilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11464625326044948125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2310182421024668428.post-2908589879106150872010-11-12T06:22:34.187+05:302010-11-12T06:22:34.187+05:30The world stinks, but you've got a fragrance w...The world stinks, but you've got a fragrance within you that will certainly make yours a better place. Perfect-world is always fairyland concept anyway. Good luck! :)Darshan Chandehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10721030762177780619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2310182421024668428.post-84533838899800406872010-11-12T01:03:25.480+05:302010-11-12T01:03:25.480+05:30What happened?? :O It is so unlike you to feel s...What happened?? :O It is so unlike you to feel so bitter!ankitanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2310182421024668428.post-41651223115850777732010-11-12T00:20:55.981+05:302010-11-12T00:20:55.981+05:30I dream these dreams too... but when you wake up e...I dream these dreams too... but when you wake up everything is a perfume once again!Sahityahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10301512463883655665noreply@blogger.com